"The two text are too different. I think you should use the same alignment for both of them. For example, the bottom text has a first-line alignment, which I don't think it's an inspired choice (it looks chaotic).
"I like it. But I think the column in left page is a little "killed" there, in a blue background. And the same the column in center-right page. I'm not the big specialist here, so my opinion may be wrong. I think I would use a grey…"