"The two text are too different. I think you should use the same alignment for both of them. For example, the bottom text has a first-line alignment, which I don't think it's an inspired choice (it looks chaotic).
"If you're going to stay with your headline font, I'd suggest kerning it in some. It's a good start though. The best thing that's going to help you is browsing this site, see what others are doing, how others papers do their…"
"Good start, simple and clean for the most part. Try creating some more space between stories and try to get elements with each article to line up, text columns, headlines, photos, etc. Keep at it, I've seen worse from professionals."
This is my first post here, so I am not too sure on the format. I am currently trying to run a small after school club newspaper, we have been trying to get new writers and we have also decided on a new design. I have no formal design training at all, I've read a few books and have been learning as much as I can. I know its not great, but it's what I have. Be as honest as you can! The stories are a work in progress, so those can be disregarded.…See More